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#2 (permalink) Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:53 pm Relative clauses - wrong use of what |
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Hi,
Please read this Relative Pronoun and let us know what you think. Regards, Torsten
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#3 (permalink) Wed Aug 22, 2007 13:00 pm what not for description |
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Ok I have read it, thanks
Please could you confirm that in the sentences above the error is that "what" is used as description clause ???
So the correct ones should be without "what"
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Jon You can meet me at english-test.net
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#4 (permalink) Wed Aug 22, 2007 13:03 pm Relative clauses - wrong use of what |
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Yes, you can simply leave out "what" in your sentences and they will be correct.
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#5 (permalink) Wed Aug 22, 2007 16:54 pm Relative clauses - wrong use of what |
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Hi alumno
Instead of using the word 'what', you could use 'that' in your sentences. However, the word 'that' is optional. So, as Torsten said, you could make your sentences correct simply by removing the word 'what':
"Where is the festival (that) you told me about?" "The sweater (that) I washed ..." . _________________ "Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power." ~ Abraham Lincoln |
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#6 (permalink) Wed Aug 22, 2007 20:16 pm That / Which |
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Ok, thanks a lot for those good comments that make me think...
So... The sentences could be made correct by using 'which' instead of 'that'... right?
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#7 (permalink) Wed Aug 22, 2007 20:29 pm Relative clauses - wrong use of what |
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Hi alumno
The sentences would be correct with the word 'that'.
The word 'which' is more often used in a non-defining clause (and a non-defining clause would also be separated from the rest of the sentence with commas).
Example of a non-defining clause:
The Festival of Lights, which is held annually, starts today at 6 pm.
The clause "which is held annually" is "extra information" in the sentence. . _________________ "Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power." ~ Abraham Lincoln |
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