Writing in IELTS: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned

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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one . The new fashion will be to have a several careers or way to earnng money and further education will be something that continues throughout life

Nowadays , the ideas of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one . There has been a great change . The new fashion will be have several careers or ways of earning money , in addition further education will be something that continues throughout life.

A few decade ago , each one hd only a single career . They know everything in their profession and know little or know about other careers . We can see that with a single career , there is an income . And when that people work in current society , they will face up to difficultlies , if they are out of work , they will be unemployed and there is not income . In addition they only know about their profession , therefore they can not work others , however if they are lucky ,they will be find a new job but with their narrow knowledge , they will be ou of work . Therefore , the idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one : to have a stable income and a stable job , we must improve our knowledge.

In fact , with developing world's economy , people should have several careers or ways of earning money and especialy education will be something that continues throughout life .When we have knowledge about many careers , we will hve many chances to develope and our income will be stable . In conclusion , we should learn to do everything , and with large knowledge , world is opened to us .

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