Google
English-Test.net
Find penpals and make new friends today!
 
possible; capable of becoming; able to be
plane
introductory
potential
fussy
TOEIC prep test: Word games free: Online Adjectives Game Answer
 
Username
Password
 Remember me? 
Search   FAQ   Memberlist   Profile   Private messages   Register   Log in 

Very formal business mail



 
ESL/EFL Worksheets and Handouts for Students Printable, photocopiable, clearly structured
Designed for teachers and individual learners
For use in a classroom, at home, on your PC
ESL Forum | English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
Meaning of this phrase: That is something you do not want to do | Verb+to | We managed TO ... Get/Arrive TO the destination
Message Author
Very formal business mail Mon Aug 27, 2007 23:26 pm  Very formal business mail
 

Hi everybody,

I'm writing to an hypothetical office assistant, that I don't know, do you think that is enough formal? Moreover is right?

Quote:
Dear Ms. yyyyy,

Concerning the Milan fair I would be grateful if you could book hotel room for me also.

Moreover could you please let me know if you have news about the supply of my notebook and e-mail account.

Kind regards,

xxxxx

Thanks in advance
_________________
--------------------------------------
Feel free to correct all mistakes in my
post, please.
--------------------------------------
velectro
I'm new here and I like it ;-)


Joined: 23 Apr 2007
Posts: 43
Location: Italy

Very formal business mail Tue Aug 28, 2007 7:04 am  Very formal business mail
 

.
Dear Ms yyyyy,

Concerning the Milan fair, I would be grateful if you could book a hotel room for me also.

Could you also please let me know if you have news about the status of my notebook and e-mail account?

Kind regards,
_________________
Canadian-American native speaker
who teaches English for a living at Mister Micawber's
ESL cafe: Interview with Mister Micawber
Mister Micawber
Language Coach
Mister Micawber

Joined: 17 Jul 2005
Posts: 3991
Location: Yokohama, Japan

Read these English anecdotes and maybe smile today? Subscribe to free email English courseEnglish grammar exercises — improve your English knowledge and vocabulary skillsHow do you use the English Prepositions correctly?Are you a native speaker of English? Then you should read this!
Very formal business mail Tue Aug 28, 2007 23:47 pm  Very formal business mail
 

thanks, this correction are really important in order to improve my writing skill.
I the near future I will try to write some essay. What do you think about? Have any other advice about the improving of writing skills?
_________________
--------------------------------------
Feel free to correct all mistakes in my
post, please.
--------------------------------------
velectro
I'm new here and I like it ;-)


Joined: 23 Apr 2007
Posts: 43
Location: Italy

Display posts from previous:   
Meaning of this phrase: That is something you do not want to do | Verb+to | We managed TO ... Get/Arrive TO the destination
ESL Forum | English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms Very formal business mail All times are GMT + 2 Hours
Page 1 of 1
Latest topics on English Forums
Two sentences, which is right? (After the Second World War, Australia began...)meaning of "Cartesian Maze"exports make its route/way "TO"Sentence: I could have helped him on in lifevocabulary in use | high vs. greatDavid and I are the only ones left who are not married.Difference: 'as good as it was old' vs 'as good as it was'Which one is right? (there are two ls[or l's] in the word little)meaning of "put the word out on smbd.""on foot" vs "by foot"Expression "Near of" (He was near of the bus stop)The more things change, the more they stay the sameon v.s. ontoExpression "largelidded eyes"use of: go aboutExpression "the letter the letter"searched or seekedPassive sentence (The number of automobiles ... greatly increased)Very formal business mail

Discover English-test.net
What is the meaning of piece work?Expression: Try as I might, I could not convince herSpam messagesgrammar have sth doneMCAT preparation test: Vocabulary Building Exercises: Noun Verb Adverb Adjective TestMCAT exam test: Word quizzes: Free Online Nouns Verbs Adverbs Adjectives GameMeaning of saturated fatty acid, weak base, react, miscibility, eukaryote, highly, vascularize, copperDefinition of fence, envy, paint, harvest, fat, wonder, sea, halt, cure, facePreposition part of speech: Late at the Office

 
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum
Subscribe to FREE email English course written by Alan Townend
First name E-mail