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#2 (permalink) Wed Sep 19, 2007 17:07 pm Use of a comma with a name. "Yes, Amy, I am listening." |
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| I prefer #1. |
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#3 (permalink) Sun Sep 30, 2007 16:39 pm Use of a comma with a name. "Yes, Amy, I am listening." |
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Hi
Could I request a native speaker to shed some light on it?
Please!
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#4 (permalink) Mon Oct 01, 2007 9:14 am Use of a comma with a name. "Yes, Amy, I am listening." |
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Hi Tom,
The comma is as you know a device for indicating a short pause. You'll notice I haven't used any commas in that sentence because a pause isn't necessary. Of your three sentences above, I would prefer number three. You'll also noitice I've popped in a comma in that sentence to please those who worship the comma.
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#5 (permalink) Mon Oct 01, 2007 10:21 am Use of a comma with a name. "Yes, Amy, I am listening." |
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. From another source:
"Use a comma to set off parenthetical elements, as in The Founders Bridge, which spans the Connecticut River, is falling down. By 'parenthetical element', we mean a part of a sentence that can be removed without changing the essential meaning of that sentence.
An addressed person's name is always parenthetical. Be sure, however, that the name is that of someone actually being spoken to: I'm telling you, Juanita, I couldn't be more surprised. (But: I told Juanita I couldn't be more surprised. [no commas])" . _________________ Native English teacher at Mister Micawber's |
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#6 (permalink) Mon Oct 01, 2007 11:23 am Use of a comma with a name. "Yes, Amy, I am listening." |
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| Mister Micawber wrote: |
| The Founders Bridge, which spans the Connecticut River, is falling down. |
Why, I drove over that bridge just the other day!  . |
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#7 (permalink) Tue Oct 02, 2007 13:15 pm Use of a comma with a name. "Yes, Amy, I am listening." |
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. I don't "worship" commas, Tom, but they do serve a purpose and there are also many conventional uses for commas. If they are overused in a sentence, they tend to distract the reader. If they are underused in a sentence, the reader may have to read the sentence several times before they can figure out what the author intended to say. As I'm sure you know, the addition or omission of a comma can also sometimes change the meaning of a sentence.
That said, your first sentence would probably be considered by most to be the correct version.
By the way, there was also a very definite reason for the comma in my previous post. . |
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#9 (permalink) Tue Oct 02, 2007 13:49 pm Use of a comma with a name. "Yes, Amy, I am listening." |
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Yes, that's right. However, the use of a comma there is quite standard. It helps the reader to quickly and efficiently identify "why" as an interjection. . |
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#10 (permalink) Tue Oct 02, 2007 18:35 pm Use of a comma with a name. "Yes, Amy, I am listening." |
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#1 is the best option, in my opinion. _________________ Billie Jean is not my lover. Hee. |
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