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#2 (permalink) Sat Sep 29, 2007 17:50 pm What's a "Fragment"? |
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Hi,
'Fragment' has one or two meanings and has the general sense of 'a small piece of something' If you drop a plate on to a hard floor, it will break into small pieces or fragments. Very old books sometimes fall to pieces after many years and you can only see pieces of the pages, which we would call fragments. Microsoft Word is suggesting that what you have written is not a complete sentence and it is therefore only a fragment and not a whole sentence.
Hope this helps
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#3 (permalink) Sat Sep 29, 2007 17:58 pm What's a "Fragment"? |
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Thanks a lot, Alan. Of Course I knew what generally means "Fragment", my langue has the same word: "Fragmento"
I think I do this mistakes because my brain is already a little bit in Spanish (We don't say most of personal pronouns, for instance). I copy-paste one of this sentences that my Word tags as a fragment (in bold):
It is the moment to do a very important choice: what to do the next years? to Go to university 5 years? Perhaps to study 10 years, if they want to do a Doctor title? To Learn something about a semi qualified work for 2 or 3 years? to Start to work in a non qualified place, with only a 2 weeks training?
if you attend to university, you can to know more and more than some topics non-relational with your career but that you love. For example Astronomy, Economics, Literature or History
I would like to know why this couple of sentences are fragments.
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#4 (permalink) Sun Sep 30, 2007 5:47 am What's a "Fragment"? |
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. Neither has a main subject or verb. They could be made complete sentences like this:
Should they perhaps choose to study 10 years, if they want to do a Doctor title? For example, you can learn about Astronomy, Economics, Literature or History.
Actually, your software has caught only a fraction of your sentence fragments and none of your other structural or semantic errors. Your essay excerpt should read something like this:
It is the moment to make a very important choice: what to do during the next years. Should you go to university for 5 years? Should you perhaps choose to study for 10 years, if you want to earn a degree in medicine? Should you learn something about a trade for 2 or 3 years? Or should you simply start to work in an unskilled position with only two weeks' training?
If you attend university, you can learn more about some fields unrelated to your career, but of personal interest. For example, you can study astronomy, economics, literature or history. . _________________ Native English teacher at Mister Micawber's |
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#5 (permalink) Sun Sep 30, 2007 14:12 pm What's a "Fragment"? |
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Thanks a lot, Misster Micawber. These are just the things that I need.
I can see clearly now one of my biggest mistakes: Put a main verb as a subject.
In spanish you can do that, i must to close the door to spanish grammar when I write in english |
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#6 (permalink) Sun Sep 30, 2007 15:04 pm What's a "Fragment"? |
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. De veras! . _________________ Native English teacher at Mister Micawber's |
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