TOEFL® essay: Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the...

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Improvement in health,education & trade are essential for the development of poorer nations? rich nations should take resposibilty to help them? give reasons

Improvement of health, education and trade are remarkable in the rich countries. They can enjoy their wonderful and meaningful life, whatever eating, shopping, traveling, education, business, health etc. They enjoy their life consuming much money. However, people living in the poor countries cannot enjoy these facilities due to financial and technological problems. These things are neccessary for the development of poorer nations and in order to improve and eradicate these problems in poor nations, rich nations should be responsible to help them.

I partly agree with the statement that the rich nations should take responsibility in helping the poor nations. The majority of poor areas are located in Africa, Latin America, India, Pakistan and south East Asia. They are facing the problems of education, medical, technology, jobs etc.

Firstly, there are no education qualities in these countries. There is no proper management of education in government institutes, there are no professional teachers and People cannot afford the high fee in the private institutes. This is the reason that people are mostly low educated in these areas. Rich nations should give funds to these nations. They should send some scholars, Teachers, volunteers or professors in these nations to improve the educational skills in the government institutes so that the people can have a quality of education and they can live well and work efficiently.

Secondly, there are no proper medical facilities in these countries. Due to the lack to professional doctors and medical facilities, people are dying due to spread of viruses and other diseases. Many children die because they are not checked up properly and are not properly vaccinated to prevent them from different diseases. There is no proper guidance to the people about the diseases. Rich countries should make hospitals in poor areas and should send some professional doctors to eradicate the problem of medical facility in poor areas. so that people in these areas can enjoy a healthy life.

Lastly, because the people in poor nations are not well educated, they don’t have proper skills in trade. Rich nations should send professional workers and economist to these countries to teach people how to make products, to help them in upgrading their business and trading skills and teach them how to sell them efficiently. The countries can earn more and more money. This will help them in making there economy better.

In conclusion, Rich countries are responsible to help the poor countries. If the situation remains constant, people in rich countries will become richer and superior whereas people in poor countries will become poorer and inferior.