TOEFL essay: Boys and girls should be educated in separate classrooms using...

[Scorpio_Da]

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Boys and girls should be educated in separate classrooms using different teaching techniques.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

First of all, I would like to emphasize that this a very imortant and extensive question. Separation of girls and boys in diferent classrooms is a great tool to improve the level of success in their education. Because placing them apart into a different facilities will definetely increase their attention towards classes and teachers.

Why are girls and boys should be separated in separate classrooms? The answer for this question I have recieved in the recent research study conducted by the French ministry of Education citing that students actually perform much better when they are separate in different classsrooms rather than being in the same classroom during their classes. But why?Because students's attention is fully directed towards their studies,teacher's teachings and homeworks while they are not preoccuppied and disturbed by what is called the unmature love games; sympathyzing and starting to develope a certain feeling towards a person from an opposite sex and thereby loosing their focus and concentration. Furthermore, students perform better not only in academic fields, but also in various spheres; extra cirrucular activites like being a member of student unions, participating in various student organizations or actvities and playing sports.

An argument can be made about the idea that they are should be educated using different teaching techniques. I can not really say that I agree with that opinion because I believe that as soon as they are separated, the teaching methods do not necessarily need to be different as the content of subejct and teachings should be same.

In sum, I would like to conlcude that boys and girls should be educated in separate classrooms for their own sake that will help them increase their performance in academic field as well as in every distinct areas. In addition to that as I mentioned above it will doubtlessly increase students' focus on their studies and prompt them to be successful in their academic life, career and future.

[Alan]

Hi,

First of all, I would like to emphasize that this a very imortant and extensive question. Separation of girls and boys in diferent classrooms is a great tool to improve the level of success in their education because placing them apart into different facilities will definItely increase their attention towards classes and teachers.

Why SHOULD girls and boys be separated in separate classrooms? The answer TO this question I have recieved in the recent research study conducted by the French ministry of Education citing that students actually perform much better when they are separate in different classsrooms rather than being in the same classroom during their classes. But why? Because students' attention is fully directed towards their studies,teacherS' INSTRUCTION and homeworks while they are not preoccuppied and disturbed by what is called IMmature love games; sympathIzing and starting to develop a certain feeling towards a person from THE opposite sex and thereby lOsing their focus and concentration. Furthermore, students perform better not only in academic fields, but also in various spheres; extra cirrucular activites like being a member of student unions, participating in various student organizations or actvities and playing sports.

An argument can be made about the idea that they should be educated using different teaching techniques. I cannot really say that I agree with that opinion because I believe that as soon as they are separated, the teaching methods do not necessarily need to be different as the content of suBJECt and teaching should be SIMILAR.

In sumMARY, I would like to conCLude that boys and girls should be educated in separate classrooms for their own sake that will help them increase their performance in academic fieldS as well as in every distinct areas. In addition to that as I mentioned above it will doubtlessly increase students' focus on their studies and prompt them to be successful in their academic life, career and future.

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Alan
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[Scorpio_Da]

Thank you Alan!
I apprecite it, thanks for your time.
Yes, I need to check my spelling.