TOEFL® essay sample: Is money useful or not useful?

[Layana]

Money is found every where and becomes a main part of our life providing us our in needs and desires. we would like to know what are the advantages and disadvantages of money??? Is money useful or not useful?

As well as the benefits of money, your dreams become reality, such as, buy an expensive Mercedes car, completing your higher education in Harvard university which is the best and more expensive university in the world, also you can travel every where you want, for example (France, Spanish, Tunisia, Unite Arab of Emirates), in these days people like using Credit cards to make there lives easier to buy many things. So if you do not like to carry large amounts of cash with you or if a company doesn't accept cash purchases such as (airlines, hotels, and car rental agencies), putting purchases on a credit card can makes buying things easier.

Moreover, money gives you a full confidence in treating with others and power feeling, it’s gate to enter in many methods of investment locally and international, and risks avoiding in strongest , buying shares and real-estates.

In addition to, Money help us to get lowest percentage of diseases, by providing these hospitals medical equipment and participating in charitable works. on the other hand, the recent medical research’s improved 5% of diseases in advance European countries, are very lowest in USA than growth countries, because they are give them flexible of facilities of medical like healthy insurance and care of young people, while the researches confirmed about 60% sequence of diseases in poor countries are found, and they do not know how to restrict these diseases because they are suffering from shortage of medical equipment and medicine.

In order to, we should be more rational about money. As we say the positive of money, also there is a negative of money, its depending on ourselves.

Nevertheless, money has a disadvantages some time makes people more greedy spending there times thinks how to get more money and in which way!!!, for example playing gamble, killing, and fighting, evil thoughts, without looking in the other right side. and Social Crimination existence in growth countries.

Finally, money is nothing in the world we fight and spend our efforts to get it and we forget our principles.

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If you would know the value of money, go and try to borrow some!!!