middle age crisis

[lilish]

Hello everyone,
The following is the writing which I'm going to present at work ,besides correction I would like to know how far I am from true english patterns of writing.

Middle age crisis;
As one gets near his forties he becomes more and more consientious about his achievements in life.
Our accomplishments and advancements are strongly dominated by the social conventions.
One might think ,since he has obtained success to the level which meets the standard requirements of the society he could possibly go through a more peaceful middle age period.Yet still there is a great possibility for most such people to be left unhappy and dissatisfied regardless of whatever achievements they have acquired,for they are filled with regret for not following his heart.
What I believe is that either way could possibly make us distabalized facing this crucial phase of life, and here is exactly where the conroversey of being arises.
once we are through middle age period, we are not either young enough to start all over again or too old that we couldn't care less,so that's why we are giving ourselves or maybe anybody who is somehow connected to us such a hard time to make something right,but the point is we might never know what!

[Boke]

you need something in there about red sports cars
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[lilish]

Hi boke,
Your reply bears no relation to my post ,but
if you think it does please be more specific

[Boke]

ok...... so in the states at least most people relate middle age crisis's with a recently divorced 40year old man owning a new shiny red sports car and chasing younger girls......but it was a .....joke
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