Expression: "Everybody's bag in the garden put..."

[Tom]

Hi

Do you find the following sentence OK and natural?

[Yankee]

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That's a bit awkward, Tom. The 'in the garden' part is odd, and saying 'put together' with the singular 'bag' strikes me as a little odd, too.

I assume you mean that each of the people in the garden had a bag. How about something like this:
Everybody in the garden had a bag, but the giant's pouch was larger than all of their bags heaped/put together.
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Amy
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ESL teacher, translator, and a native speaker of American English