TOEFL essay samples: Honesty is the best policy

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I agree with the statement honesty is the best policy.Honesty is the best policy, it should be followed by everyone to succeed in their life. Though we can make money by improper way but it won't give us a good status in the society. Honesty is important for both personal life and buisness life. As we go through the history of the great leaders, they all succed their life mainly by the way of their life style. They all followed the truth and honest.

Honesty is very important in many aspects of our life. If we are honest everyone believe us. If we are not be honest for the once. none respect us. when if we speak truth people wont believe us. For example if i ask information about someone to my friend, he gave some information which is not truth. when i come to know that,i won't believe my friend next time. Even it will make gap between us. In some situation we try to cheat to our parent. For example if i need some money to go for theatre. I lie to my parents that i need a money for my assignment work. they also believe me and gave me a money. If it comes to know by my teacher or any of my friends. They won't believe me next time. Even if i ask him money for my assignment, they won't believe. Also this situation makes them to worry
about my behaviour. Instead of having these problem its better to be honest to our parents.

Best way to avoid these problems is explain our situation that all our friends are going to theatre they are asking me to join with them. Can you give me a permission to go with them. If we do this, they surely allow us to join with them. It makes them happy. We should follow the honesty in our personal to have happy family life. Even it's important to be honest with our parters. It gives good understanding between them.

In case of buisness life we should be honesty to our coworkers and our boss. It makes good opinion about us. We are rewarded by them. Buisness success primarly based on the honesty. If we are honest in our part then we can become reputated person in our buisness.

In conclussion honesty is impormant to succeed in every part our life.

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