#2 (permalink) Fri Jan 11, 2008 19:32 pm defining clause with 'which' |
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Hi Liza
In American English, a common usage of the relative pronoun 'which' is to introduce a nondefining (nonrestrictive) clause, and I believe that many grammarians will also go so far as to state that 'which' is incorrectly used in defining clauses such as yours. Take a look at the usage note here: http://www.bartleby.com/61/35/T0143500.html
So, yes, either the use of 'that' or the omission of the relative pronoun would be the best solution for your sentences in AmE.
The use of the word 'which' in your sentences sounds quite awkward to my American ear. However, 'which' might not sound awkward to a Brit -- but you'll have to wait for a Brit to comment on that. :wink:
PS The use of the word 'fancy' in your second sentence also strikes me as being more British than American. . _________________ "Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power." ~ Abraham Lincoln |
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