TOEFL essay: Many people feel that history, literature, and other liberal arts...

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Choosing a major is the most difficult moment in a student’s life. Everybody has his or her own preferences and a talent is particular topic. Some of students think that the most interesting and useful topic to study is history; others think that math is the best subject to choose. In my opinion, the idea that exactsciences are the most important topics to study in school is stronger. Being a student, I understand the importance of this question. I have made choice basing myself on several reasons.

The first and most important reason is that studying exactsciences will help student to find job quicker and easier. According to statistic, most wanted specialist are that, who have business education. He or she can find job rather quickly and also, it can be a well-paid job. It is very important for all students to start earn money and provide themselves as soon as possible. I have a friend who studied business administration and he had a dream o buy his own car. After finishing his education he found a very good job for a 23 years old boy. So, after one year he earned as much money as he needed to buy a car ,and he did it. When I talked to him about his choice he said that he did the right decision and would like to change nothing.

The second reason, as I think, is that choosing exactsciences gives students more opportunities to think themselves not to learn some dates, history events or generally accepted facts. Students don’t’ have to spend their time reading huge history chapters or history of literature full of dates and events. They also don’t’ have to learn it and keep in mind for a long time.

In other words, I believe that opportunity to find a good job and a chance not to spend time on reading large chapters will be good reasons for students to study such subject as math, physics and engineering.