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Is the sentence correct? (Health monitoring of the company employees engaged...)



 
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Is the sentence correct? (Health monitoring of the company employees engaged...) Mon Jan 28, 2008 20:15 pm  Is the sentence correct? (Health monitoring of the company employees engaged...)
 

Hello everyone,

I'd like to ask if you find the following sentence natural and gramatically correct.

Health monitoring of the company employees engaged in production is an integral part of the general politics to organize health protection and safety measures.
KLPNO
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Is the sentence correct? (Health monitoring of the company employees engaged...) Mon Jan 28, 2008 22:54 pm  Is the sentence correct? (Health monitoring of the company employees engaged...)
 

Hi KLPNO
The sentence sounds a little awkward. The problem is in the second half. I would change it to something like '...part of the company's health and safety policy.'
Hope this helps.
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Is the sentence correct? (Health monitoring of the company employees engaged...) Mon Jan 28, 2008 23:02 pm  Is the sentence correct? (Health monitoring of the company employees engaged...)
 

Anchorman wrote:
Hi KLPNO
The sentence sounds a little awkward. The problem is in the second half. I would change it to something like '...part of the company's health and safety policy.'
Hope this helps.
Hi Anchorman
Thank you very much.
KLPNO
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