TOEFL® essay: People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing

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People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing

When I was a kid it was always a hard task for my parents to force or persuade me do things that I didn't want to do. But when I grew up I realized that there are plenty of things we are obligated to perform to succeed in our education or in our career.

I am absolutely convinced that even though it is disstressing and sometimes really annoying, but we have to have more patience and be more flexible to do things we do not ejoy at all.

For example, it is really annoying for me to deal with my messy roommate. She is the sloppiest person ever, and it is almost impossible to make her keep our apartment clean. Nevertheless I try to deal with her beacuse she is a really good and kind person and always ready to help me.

The other thing is my part time job which is very stressful . I have to deal with lots of numbers and there's a huge responsibility on me in order not make any mistakes, otherwise I can lose my job. But I belong to those kind of persons who think positively, if for instance I be stubborn, lazy and ignorant I will first of all lose my job, then fail my exams and eventually become a loser, which I don't want to be in any case.

People , in my opinion in this dynamic and "dog eat dog '' world do not have that luxury opportuity to do whatever they want to do. Most of us are realistic when we look at our life, we cannot let ourselves reach to the point when beacue of our laziness or bulkiness we will lose everything we have earned during our life.

To conclude, I just want to point out that only diligence and flexibilty make quality, sometimes people study or work hard on their hated jobs to make a really good and fortunate future for their children so they can get a decent education and just be happy.

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