Question frame: Could you tell him to stop at the next bus stop.

[Pavanhotscan]

Hi

last night i was travelling on cab , i sat on the last row of the cab, then i asked another person who was sitting behind the driver's seat " Could you tell him to stop at the next bus stop"

could you pointout the grammar mistakes in the above sentences(current line also)?

Regards
Pavan

[Torsten]

Last night I was using a cab and said to another passenger: 'Could you please tell the cabby to stop at the next bus station'?

Could you please point out the grammar mistakes I've made in the sentence above (including this line)?

Regards,
Pavan

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