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Usage of commas in a series of independent sentences



 
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Usage of commas in a series of independent sentences #1 (permalink) Fri Mar 14, 2008 14:55 pm   Usage of commas in a series of independent sentences
 

I am aware that joining two independent sentences together with only a comma creates a comma split; however, is it possible to use only commas to separate independent sentences in a series? If so, what rules have to be followed?

I had a very enjoyable evening. The meal was delicious, the service could not have been better and the company was excellent.

Thank you.

Instead of a full stop after evening, should it be a colon?
Would it make any difference if the sentence read: The meal was delicious, the service was good, and the company was excellent.
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Usage of commas in a series of independent sentences #2 (permalink) Sat Mar 15, 2008 15:37 pm   Usage of commas in a series of independent sentences
 

Hi,

It very much depends on the context. In your sentence:

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I had a very enjoyable evening. The meal was delicious, the service could not have been better and the company was excellent.
you could use the semi-colon (;) but that would make the writing sound too literary and serious. In that sort of context I would stick to the full stop or possibly use a dash (-) after 'evening' as that would be more fitting for a conversational piece of English.

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