TOEFL essay: Advantages and disadvantages of 3 or more families living together

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There r many pros & cons for living with 3 or more families together. the main advantage is having grandparents. If grandparents r there to take care after kids, both parents can work. There is no need to send them to daycare or baby sitting houses. kids can play with their cousins.parents can rely about kids protection in home.

There may support u in them both ups & downs in life. If u need money in hard times, ur parents may be supporting you. U can share ur expense with them. In my exaamination i got help from my uncle.