#2 (permalink) Mon Feb 14, 2005 14:16 pm Corrected version |
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How about this:
(corrected version of your text below) Please check the grammar in this paragraph.
Following the factory inspection undertaken by our ITO and TCS officers, we have no further comment to make and wish to give our approval for the manufacture to begin. We thereby confirm that manufacture should start. For your information we are also enclosing a timetable for manufacture,delivery and installation of the airport seating.
Can I write this letter in this way? If it isn't correct, please let me know how it should be corrected. _________________ English as a Second Language You can read my ESL story Present Simple |
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Alan Co-founder

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