Hi, could you guys please correct mistake in my resume!

[Andy]

Hi,

Hello, I'm a new member. Currently I'm applying for a job so it requires a resume. I've written one, but I'm not really sure if my resume is mistake free. Therefore I would appreciate if you guys help me to correct it. Thank you in advance.

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PERSONAL INFORMATION

Full name: Andy
Gender: Male
Date of birth: xx xx xxxx
Citizenship: xxx
Immigration status: xxx
Address: xxx
Mobile: xxx
Email: xxx

CAREER OBJECTIVE

My aim is to pursuit a career in a professional working environment in which I can develop and demonstrate my professional abilities. My long-term career goal is to become a professional expert in the field of Electronics, Telecommunication and Network Engineering.

EDUCATION

Bachelor of Engineering at University of xxx
Major in Electronics and Telecommunication
Degree Awarded: 19th Dec 20xx

Major subjects:
Communication System
Digital Communication System
Electronics and Communication Design
Control System
Computer and Data Networks

Master of Telecommunication and Networks Engineering
at University of xxx
Date of commencement: Feb 20xx
Major subjects:
Communication Protocols
Telecommunication Networks Management
Telecommunications Industry Management
Transmission Systems

PROJECTS

Counting Circuit Design (20xx)
The design was about to make a circuit which is able to count the number of packet passing a sensor.

Pre-amplifier Circuit Design (20xx)
The design was about a circuit which transforms the audio signal into standard form before handling it to amplifier.

Electronic Compass Design (20xx)
The aim of this design was about an electronic compass which can show the user direction basing on earth magnetic field. In the design, we built a circuit which provides power and get back signals from a simple electronic compass. After that, the signal is handed over to a programmed chip in order to be processed. After being processed, the result must be display on a small crystal monitor.

Image Processing Design (20xx)
This project is my honours project. The aim of the project was to build a system which processes on images captured from a camera. In details, capture images are about fishes and our system must be able to analyse and identify information from those images. The information was number of fishes, the moving direction, the biggest and smallest objects … ect… The project was awarded for the best final year project demonstration.

EMPLOYMENT EXPERIENCE

xxx Television Company
Position: Trainee/Technical Support Assistance (Feb to Mar 20xx)
- Studying on television production line and relevant techniques.
- Working in assembling and maintaining devices.
- Working as technical support, trouble shooting, research and develop assistance.

xxx Plastic Company
Position: Trainee/Technical Assistance (Nov 20xx to Feb 20xx)
- Studying on the production line of plastic products.
- Working as device maintenance assistance.
- Salesman for plastic products

RELEVANT SKILLS

Proficient in Programming
C/C++ Programming
Java Programming
Matlab Programming

Fluent in engineering software
Circuit Marker
Orcad
Protel
MaxPlus II
P-Spice

Fluent in computer applications
Microsoft OS and Office products
Internet browsers
Computer security

Good team player, team leader
Responsible, self motivate and problem solving
Proficient in group working
Teacher of a charity organisation in xxx
President of xxx Society in University of xxx
Organiser in Multicultural Week in University of xxx

OTHER INTERESTS

Sport
Swimming, playing chess.
Others
Traveling, making new friends, reading, listening to music, watching movie, cooking.

REFEREES

xxx

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Once again, thank you in advance.

Andy

[Molly]

[Molly]

[Andy]

Thank you Molly

I appreciate all the helps from you guys

[Molly]