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#2 (permalink) Sat Apr 05, 2008 20:43 pm Does it sound natural? |
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Hi KLPNO
That sentence is difficult to follow. I'd recommend rewording it. . _________________ "Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power." ~ Abraham Lincoln |
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Yankee I'm a Communicator ;-)

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#3 (permalink) Sat Apr 05, 2008 21:18 pm Does it sound natural? |
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Hi Amy
Thank you very much for your feedback. Here's my second variant:
As a result of this project, the adaptation of Soft Skills trainings was carried out and recommendations for organizing and conducting Soft Skills trainings for XXX employees were presented. |
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Klpno I'm here quite often ;-)
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#4 (permalink) Sun Apr 06, 2008 1:04 am Does it sound natural? |
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Hi KLPNO
I'd suggest this (though I'm not 100% sure it's exactly the same meaning you had in mind):
As a result of this project, the Soft Skills training program was adapted, and recommendations for organizing and conducting Soft Skills seminars for XXX employees were presented. . _________________ "Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power." ~ Abraham Lincoln |
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Yankee I'm a Communicator ;-)

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#5 (permalink) Sun Apr 06, 2008 10:51 am Does it sound natural? |
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Hi Amy
Your suggestion expresses the intended meaning very well. Thank you very much again. |
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Klpno I'm here quite often ;-)
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