#2 (permalink) Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:02 am Is the text written correctly? |
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. You need to be briefer and you need to use commas; your original text was difficult to understand. You have also failed to learn that 'training' is uncountable, though I have corrected it for you several times now.
While carrying out the project, YYY consultants had difficulty gathering data on specific activities in some divisions of XXX. To make the task easier, workshops were planned, and 8-10 employees were supposed to take part in them. However, since it was impossible to gather several employees at the same time, they decided to conduct individual interviews instead.
During the interview, respondents admitted the importance of this project and expressed their willingness to assist the T&D department in increasing the effectiveness of XXX staff training at Soft Skills. Managers of XXX functional divisions also made a number of recommendations for improving the teaching process. . _________________ Native English teacher at Mister Micawber's |
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