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Sentence correction: When i was in B.tech, we gave dance program on the College



 
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Sentence correction: When i was in B.tech, we gave dance program on the College #1 (permalink) Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:30 am   Sentence correction: When i was in B.tech, we gave dance program on the College
 

HI ,

I am writing some sentences below this line.

"When i was in B.tech, we gave dance program on the College Function Day. We hadn't synchronized the dance steps , so the dance program didn't get well".

Does the above paragraph contain any mistakes?

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Sentence correction: When i was in B.tech, we gave dance program on the College #2 (permalink) Tue Apr 15, 2008 10:01 am   Sentence correction: When i was in B.tech, we gave dance program on the College
 

Well, I'd simply put it like this -
"When I was in B.Tech, we gave a dance program on the College Function Day. We hadn't synchronized the dance steps, so the dance program didn't go down well.
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