TOEFL essay writing: Parents are the Best Teachers in our life

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Parents are the Best Teachers in our life

Parents are very important in the life. Our parents are the first realistic unite. Certainly, the first people in our life as children as are they and they feel enjoy getting children. Ours parents had have many experiences was taught them. On the other hand, some people think that parents in their parenthood can teach their children better than teachers. Actually, I agree with that topic parents would be better than teachers in educating their children for several reasons.

Firstly, our parents are our love in the life, and they are spending there time for teach us. In addition, they are teaching us how we treat with people in the world, so not everyone borne without parents. If we have any problem, we must back to our parents. Our parents every day give us from there experience. However, parents teach us what is positive and negative. I have example, when I was a little boy. My parents teach me whom can I did my prey. In addition, my father’s was taking me with him if, he had invited from his friends. Therefore, he taught me how can talked with another people from different my generation.

Secondly, we need our parents when we have any difficult, decide to take there opinion. Sure, our parents are teaching us when we need them. Their doors open to us every time. In addition, the parents are real school in the life. We could not learn, or make communicate with other people without them. Such as, my parents are have not education in them life, so they are teaching me from there life experience very well.

Thirdly, Children may strongly believe or listen to their parents because of their nature relationship. For example, a little boy may naturally happily greet other people every time he meets just because their parents teach him to do that . It may be easier for parents to expect their children to obey. For instance, a father can tell his little daughter to get up earlier everyday, which is not easy for teachers.

Finally, our parents have a lot of experience, and they enjoy when they teach us. In addition, we can get nature habit from them. I am sure our parents are realistic school in the life. I am enjoying with there teaching. I forget to tell something about them. I love them more than I love myself and I miss them.