Essay correcting: What is your opinion, regarding to tourism in Cambodia?

[kingvireaksith]

Dear Torsten Daerr,

I'm writing to you to ask some help, Please could correct my assay writing, as following,

TOPIC: What is your opinion, regarding to tourism in Cambodia?

Tourism factor are became more popular, and the fastest economic grow to the countries of the world. Cambodia is now increasingly attract over two million tourists a year, and continuing more and more its increase. There’re several tourism sites, such as cultural, natural and eco-tourism place in Cambodia. There are both advantages and disadvantages in tourism, however, in my view, tourism industry is one among others to increase profits to the people, and as well as, is to reduce step by step in success of the country’s poverty.

To begin with, tourism business is to promote the culture and tradition of ancient Khmer to the world, especially, the empire Khmer in between 9-13 century. This is the great time of kingdom of Cambodia of its past history.

Also, tourism industry is widely collect/attract investors come into the country, which is generally provide many jobs related to hotel, guest-house, tour-guide, tour-operator and transportation service provider, and as well as, to provide indirectly to farmers, in case of high product requirement of tourism market, which encourage them to make more product as the need.

Finally, it always helps government to work toward reducing poverty, regarding to increase of tourists. In particular, the infrastructures were built to link to tourism places. It’s really good to the local people as well to get access to town or society. Like government said that “Building road, is to build the hope of people”.

In spite of advantages of tourism, there can be many disadvantages too; firstly, it’s a negative affect or/and impact directly to Cambodia traditional, identity and culture. And it’s also more pollution that causes from the tourists, the people always evict from their land instead of developing that zone in the purpose of tourism. Lastly, the more requirements of the tourists are becoming in high inflation among other reasons.

To sum up, I personally think that tourism industry really help improving the good living standard of the people and national economic grow, like Cambodia as a poor country. So Cambodia must open the sky policy to flow in more tourists. It means that to reduce the poor throughout the country is the development.

I'm looking forward to hearing from.

Best Regards,

King Vireaksith