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#2 (permalink) Wed May 14, 2008 5:18 am Why not Present Participle here? |
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| FAIL is a verb, emphasized by capitalization, and all right. |
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#3 (permalink) Wed May 14, 2008 5:51 am Why not Present Participle here? |
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Hi duc
You're right. Something is missing in that sentence. There are two easy ways to repair it. One way is to use 'failing' (your suggestion): - Enterprises failing to conform to standards will face severe punishment.
OR you can add a relative pronoun ('that' or possibly 'which'): - Enterprises that fail to conform to standards will face severe punishment. . _________________ "Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power." ~ Abraham Lincoln |
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#4 (permalink) Wed May 14, 2008 9:53 am Why not Present Participle here? |
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Hi Amy,
Very nice to see you again!
I have a feeling too that something is missing in both 'sentences'. But I also feel both of them are like titles of some news reports. If so, is it possible not to follow the strict grammatical rules?
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#5 (permalink) Wed May 14, 2008 13:55 pm Why not Present Participle here? |
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Hi Haihao
I understood Duc's post to mean that the first example he gave was a headline, and the second example was a sentence from the article. In addition, Duc's second example does not look like a headline to me. Simply omitting an -ing ending from an otherwise fairly complex sentence is not the way a headline is typically made. I can imagine this as a headline version of Duc's second sentence, for example: Severe Punishment for Noncompliance . _________________ "Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power." ~ Abraham Lincoln |
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#6 (permalink) Thu May 15, 2008 2:43 am Why not Present Participle here? |
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Thank you so much again, Amy.
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