TOEFL essay: A friend of yours has receive some money and plans to use it

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A friend of yours has receive some money and plans to use all of it either to go on a vacation or to buy a car

your friend has asked you for advice. Compare your frien's two choices and explain which one you think your friend should choose.use specific reasons and details to your answer.

Everything is better with a friend, whatever I do whenever I go its better with a friend.
Person who has a good friend he is lucky in the world. Friendship is the special gift from the God. With a friend we share our thoughts and feelings. Even we like to share our favorite things with him. Friends are always ready to help, any time we need them they are with us for support.
If my friend got some money and asked me to choose whether spend in vacation or to buying a car. I’ll suggest him to buy a car. Car is a every day needed thing.
If he will buy a car, he will have transportation. He can go everywhere without someone’s help. Now he will not have to ask for ride he will be independent. Now a days in this fast running life everyone should have their own vehicle otherwise it is difficult to catch the speed with world.

On the other hand, if I suggest him to go on a vacation and spend money there.
By going on a vacation you enjoy with your friends and family He will have fun. and chance to see a new place and learn new things. It will give him more excitement and a change from his daily routine.
Vacation will refresh his routine and gives enjoyment and happiness in his life.

In the conclusion as a friend I will suggest him to buy a car. Of course vacation will more entertain him, he can go on a vacation some another time, but car will give him freedom, independency in his life.