give us your feedback on the course or seminar you attended?

[Torsten]

Could you please let me know what you make of this sentence:

Since we constantly work on improving our training programs we would appreciate it if you could give us your feedback on the course or seminar you attended.

Many thanks,
Torsten
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[Jamie (K)]

It sounds okay to me. What do you want to know?

Maybe it could be broken up:

We constantly work to improve our training programs. Therefore, we would appreciate your feedback on the course or seminar you attended.

or

To help us improve our training programs, please give us your feedback on the course or seminar you attended.

[Torsten]

Hi Jamie,

Thanks for your feedback -- I came up with this sentence as a translation of a German sentence.
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