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Sentence correction: I presume that to pursue MBA, experience is not matter.



 
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Sentence correction: I presume that to pursue MBA, experience is not matter. #1 (permalink) Sun Jun 01, 2008 17:42 pm   Sentence correction: I presume that to pursue MBA, experience is not matter.
 

Hi ,

I wrote the paragraph in the below sentence , could you find mistakes and any modification is needed in the below sentences,

"I presume that to pursue M.B.A , experience is not matter. if you see, so many young C.E.O's are there in many organizations. they are running the organizations very efficiently and effectively.If they have an experience it is an asset to their qualification."
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Sentence Correction #2 (permalink) Sun Jun 01, 2008 18:01 pm   Sentence Correction
 

pavanhotscan wrote:
Hi ,

"I presume that to pursue M.B.A , experience is not matter. if you see, so many young C.E.O's are there in many organizations. they are running the organizations very efficiently and effectively.If they have an experience it is an asset to their qualification."


I presume that to pursue an M.B.A, experience does not matter. If you see, that there are so many young C.E.Os in many organizations, that are running the organizations very efficiently and effectively. If they have experience it is an (added) asset to their qualification.

I have tried to copy edit it and not affect your style. The use of added is your choice, but might make it closer to your argument.

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