Sentence correction: My uncle advised me that we shouldn't be arrogant to the...

[pavanhotscan]

HI

I am writing one sentence below this line

"My uncle advised me that we shouldn't be arrogant to the elders even if we became the great position in the society."

Could you point out any mistakes in the above sentence ?

Regards
Pavan

[Mister Micawber]

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My uncle advised me that we shouldn't be arrogant with our seniors even if we rise to a high position in society.
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Canadian-American native speaker
who teaches English for a living at Mister Micawber's
ESL cafe: Interview with Mr. Micawber