 Thu Jun 05, 2008 5:30 am TOEFL essay: My biography |
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My name is Giang (Gan for short). I was born on 29th Nov, 1992. I’ve grown up in Hanoi, Vietnam. For now, I’m a student in a well-known high school called Viet Duc.
Except for school’s hours, I spend almost rest of my time for social work. I’ve been working for an international organization which is known as The Dreams + Teams, for 2 years. This organization is available for teenagers wanting to prove their leadership skills as well as having chance to express themselves. To be honest, I feel really lucky to be one of the four-manager of the represent center for this organization in Vietnam. Together with more than 20 other members, we’ve built up lots of events which can make us proud everytime we talk about them. One of the most memorable event of last year was a pretty big Mid – summer party for orphans and disabled children. As a result, we saw how useful we, as well as our organization, could be.
On the other hand, just like any others who are at the same age as me, I love music. Japanese and American tunes always lift me up so high. I can hardly think of a day in my life without music. People can rarely find me without my
headphones and my ipod. If they do, it means I’m doing things which I take really seriously.
There’s something I find pretty strange about myself. Easily, I can imagine every part of my life, every scene, has its own soundtrack fitting so perfectly, just like a movie. Do you think that’s pretty interesting??
Right now, I don’t know what I’m going to do in the future. But I don’t want to think about that much now. ‘Cos I just want to live the way I am. You may also get that as the goal of my life!
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peace_love2911
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Actually, this is my TOEFL course's assignment, so I'm hoping someone will correct my job carefully in details! Anyway, still thank you a lot!