Need some help in my CV. (Grammer, correct english, etc.)

[royazr]

Shalom, My name is Roy. and i'm an attorney. i'm having a few interviews right now, and i'm sending CVs to law firms, hope you can help out!

Here is my CV, any suggestion and help will be useful! - Roy.

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* Contact: ..

* Education, Awards & Legal practice

2003 – 2007 LLB College of Management (Avg. 86, Commercial Law Avg. 90)

• 2007 Adi Azar Memorial Award (ibid), for best article - Intellectual Property (Analyses the issue of file sharing in the music industry)
• 2004 – 2005 Reviewer in "Zman Emet" online law journal, College of Management
• 2006 Participated in the 2006 College Mock Trial (Grade: 95)
• 2004 Legal Aid Clinic (Grade: 92)

* Professional Employment

2007-8 Ministry of Communications legal division

• Mainly practiced in the area of Communication law, Administrative law, Antitrust, Tender laws, Contracts law, Company laws and Treaties.
• My work involved writing complex Legal reviews involving comprehensive comparative research, and dealing with ministry pleading and judicial Papers, I routinely worked with major firms and legal departments.
• Some of the legal teams and issues I joined during my internship: Number portability, Wimax frequency allocation policy, VOD communication law amendment, the transfer of the Bezeq controlling shareholdership, "Teva Hadvarim" royalties conflict, the regulations reducing consumers commitment in the cellular sector from 36 months to 18 months, policy as regards contents providers, cellular radiation and various legal aspects raised in the Grunau committee.

2006-7 College of Management, Research assistant to Dr. Nili Karako,
First year student tutor, in English

* Community Work

2003 – 2005 Various community activity: Perach Tutor, "Acharay" math matriculation tutorship, "Eshel" – Joint Coordinator
2002 92nd Street Y, Manhattan, Camp Counselor, Jewish Agency US Summer Camps Project (2 Months)

* Technical skills, legal research skills

• Full command of MS-Office: Word, PowerPoint and Excel.
• Comfortable with legal data retrieval technology, Lexis and international legal databases as well as local databases, "Takdin", "Dinim Vaod", "Nevo", etc.

* Army Service

1999 – 2002 Combat soldier and non-commissioned officer, Nachal Brigade.

* Language skills, Hobbies

• Hebrew – mother tongue * Hobbies: Writing, Swimming, Running, Chess, Hiking, Piano-playing
• English – good verbal and literary skills

* Recommenders: .. (* Recommenders contact details are in my Hebrew CV)