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#2 (permalink) Mon Jun 16, 2008 7:36 am Expression "the time when..." |
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| Both are fine, I think, and I don't think to say "the time when..." is redundant all about. |
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#4 (permalink) Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:12 am Expression "the time when..." |
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| "the time that" sounds more formal to me. |
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#6 (permalink) Tue Jun 17, 2008 18:21 pm Expression "the time when..." |
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Yes, it's redundant, and yes, it's used that way all the time, especially in vivid story-telling when you relate an incident.
"Hey, remember that time when were were about six, and we went to the Yarmouth Clam Fesitval?" "No, I don't remember that!" "Oh, you must! That was the time when you ate that huge thing of fried dough and then threw up from the Ferris wheel!" "No, you're wrong. I threw up from the Ferris wheel at the Great Aventure. But now I remember - the Clam Fesitval was when you stuck the whole candied apple in your mouth at once and your mother thought we'd have to get the jaws of life to get it out." |
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#8 (permalink) Tue Jun 17, 2008 18:29 pm Expression "the time when..." |
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Nah, I made that up. They and I have never thrown up on anything. Knock wood.
And darn it, I was making another post, trying to say when I would use "That was when you..." compared to "That was the time [that] you...." and I hit the wrong key and it disappeared.  |
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#9 (permalink) Tue Jun 17, 2008 18:29 pm Expression "the time when..." |
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Yes, it's redundant, and yes, it's used that way all the time, especially in vivid story-telling when you relate an incident.
"Hey, remember that time when were were about six, and we went to the Yarmouth Clam Fesitval?" "No, I don't remember that!" "Oh, you must! That was the time when you ate that huge thing of fried dough and then threw up from the Ferris wheel!" "No, you're wrong. I threw up from the Ferris wheel at the Great Aventure. But now I remember - the Clam Fesitval was when you stuck the whole candied apple in your mouth at once and your mother thought we'd have to get the jaws of life to get it out." |
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#11 (permalink) Tue Jun 17, 2008 21:14 pm Expression "the time when..." |
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No, I would not use it in formal English. Use either "that was when" or "that was the time" but not both.
You can say "That was the time you..." when you want to distinguish it from prior of subsquent times. That was the time you went without first making reseverations and ended up spending the first night in your rental car.
You can say "That was when you..." to identify something that happened or was going on. That was when you were still married to Peter. That was when you had that crazy haircut. |
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#13 (permalink) Wed Jun 18, 2008 18:16 pm Expression "the time when..." |
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Great link.
"... from the time when he was governor of Texas." -- This covers an entire period of time. I completely recant my saying it's redundant when you are referring to an entire period of time. I was focused on specific incidents, like my amusement park example.
If you can replace the word "time" with "period," then "the time when" equates to "the period in which." |
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