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meaning of "In terms" | difference between choose and select
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too much value added? #1 (permalink) Tue Jun 24, 2008 21:26 pm   too much value added?
 

Hi, is just me or is there a bit 'too much value' in the following sentence?

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too much value added? #2 (permalink) Tue Jun 24, 2008 22:09 pm   too much value added?
 

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too much value added? #3 (permalink) Wed Jun 25, 2008 5:10 am   too much value added?
 

There's too much "value", and the omission of a necessary comma makes the sentence hard to read.
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