Sentence: I am contesting for Talent Manager in Syntillations Election 08.

[pavanhotscan]

Hi ,

I am writing two senteces below this line .

"I am contesting for Talent Manager in Syntillations Election 08."

"Would you please vote fo me in Syntillations Election 08?"

The words of "Talent Manager" and "Syntillation Election" are related to my company

Except those words which are marked in RED COLOR FONT ,does it have any grammatical mistakes in the above sentences.

Regards
Pavan

[Theeny]

The first sentence would be improved by using 'running' instead of 'contesting', as we usually say that someone runs in an election. If the name of the election isn't Syntilliation Election 08, it may also sound better to say 'the 2008 Syntillation Election'.

Hope this helps

Athena