TOEFL essay sample: Community's transportation!

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Write your community’s transportation. How do people generally get around? Is the transportation good or bad?

Community’s transportations in my city are buses, cars, motorbikes. Transportation by motorbike is the most popular. If you want to go whatever place in whatever time, you can use immediately your motorbike. That is convenient. Transportation by car is less common. It is expensive and only rich people can use it. Transportation by bus has developed recently years. Although transportation by bus is the cheapest, there are many disadvantages.

The transportation is bad. The first, in the rush hour, there are many transports, especially the motorbikes. They squeeze into the small streets and dense crowd. So, traffic jam happen for hours together. The speech developing line of communication is less than the speech increasing transport is one of reason of traffic jam. The second, the bus has serviced bad. Servant in bus does not respect passengers. The bus driver speeds along the streets; he is careless. Therefore, there are many traffic heart-breaking accidents. The third, it takes a lot of time to wait for bus. All of above reasons, people seldom go by public transport.

I think there are many methods to improve seldom going by public transport situation. The first, we raise the quality servant. The servants in bus and bus driver respect passengers; they serve passengers warmly, friendly and open-hearted. The local government has to invent money in developing line of communication and buying many buses. Buses could run 24 hours a day. Then they would be available all time to the people who need them. I always try to take public transportation whenever possible; and I encourage friends and neighbors to try it too. I think we must support public transportation I order to create a better world.