Usage of "Are looking at"

[Sahra]

Please can you check for me this letter? My writing skills are very poor, please let me know how I can improve.

Hi
Thank you for your much appreciated support and the way you had prepared me for my interview. If I have give details about the day of my interview, we were group of nine people firstly we filled all the applications, shortly after that I have been called to be interviewed, the interviewer asked me few questions and I answered with the confident. The interview time was only twenty minutes and I was very happy the way I answered all that questions.

Thank you

[Kitosdad]

Hi,

Thank you for your much appreciated support ,and the way you had prepared me for my interview.

If I had to give details about the day of my interview, I'd say, we were group of nine people, and first we filled in all of the applications.

Shortly after that I was called in to be interviewed.

The interviewer asked me a few questions and I answered them all with confidence.

The interview lasted only twenty minutes, and I was very happy with the way in which I had answered all of the questions.
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[Mister Micawber]

Well, for one thing, there is no call whatsoever for past perfect here. I suggest:

Dear Mr [surname],

Thank you for your support and your help in preparing me for my interview. It involved a group of nine people. First, we filled out all the application forms. Shortly after that, I was called in to be interviewed. The interviewer asked me several questions, and I answered them with confidence. The interview took only twenty minutes, and I was very satisfied with the way I answered all the questions.
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[Leonor]

Mr. Torsten,
I did Lesson 10 and I make two mistakes, my score was 8 to 10.

I wrote "Why he is" instead of "Why is he"
I wrote I'm not often travelling" instead of I don't often travell

I did these next examples fot questions:

Who likes to share this chocolate with me?
What does Picasso pictures feel you?
Which is more interesting to watch television or to read a book?
Where are my parents going out?
When does the dinner be served?
Why is the weather so rainy?
Whose sweater is these?
How do yo do for to be always in good mood?

I listened to Sue, as always she is so clear that is nice to hear she again.

I wish to write in english as you "one day"

Best regards
Leonor

[Tryyourbest]

Teacher!Helpme!
Could you help me to distinguish between seek, chase, pursue and catch. It's very important for me.
I have a sentence using 4 words but I don't know to choose which word.That is:
1. A part-time job gives me the freedom to______ my own interests.
A. seek B. chase C. pursue D. catch
Thanks!

[Tryyourbest]

1.What he told me was a_____of lies.
A.pack B.load C.mob D.flock
What is the missing word, teacher?
Help me!
Have a nice day!

[Mister Micawber]

1. A part-time job gives me the freedom to pursue my own interests.
1.What he told me was a pack of lies.

Both 'pursue one's interests' and 'a pack of lies' are fixed phrases.
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[Favourmegod]

Hi,
i am enjoying this forum ,please i have a question to ask anybody that know it can help me out
My question , I do not know how and where to use the word THIS and THESE
please i will clear explanation

[Mister Micawber]

'This' point to one nearby thing: 'This pencil is red.'
'These' points to two or more nearby things: 'These pencils are red.'
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[Tryyourbest]

Oh! It's very interesting for me, "pursue one's interest and pack of lies", I get it.
Many thanks for Mister Micawber!
Have a nice day!

[Leonor]

Mr. Torsten, Good afternoon. I would like to write you, but I don't know how to enter in a forum, in another lessons I could find out MESSEGE, this time NO. Sorry, If I make a mistake. For me I say a word and I tell a story. "Advanced" it's an important word, it is not for me, and I am afraid that never I would overtake this position is only for people who really knows english language. I am only a learner and in my opinion only you can decide if I can to climb one step.I studied english for years and years and I think it's not easy. Say vs. Tell: I answered 6 questions out of 10. In the sentences there are words that I have never known and I have a doubt how to use it. Thank you, next time I hope I would find the forum. Best regards . Leonor Just now the computer's teacher is coming to teach me how to enter in a forum, I think I could do it after today.

[Hailu]

which i gave you that picture where do you hang.?

[Mujahid]

What is the name of that picture which you are looking at on the wall.

In above sentense one is poniting out a thing which not near and can be some where else by using "that" and "which" is use to link this thing.

Are you going to see that film that is on at the cinema next week?

In above sentence "that" is used twice once to pointing thing and second to link it.

Please correct me if I m not. :)

Best Regards
Mujahid

[Mister Micawber]

You need a question mark after the first sentence, Mujahid. Otherwise, they are fine and your explanations are fine.
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[Jalil's Fellow]

i have a big problem figuring out when to use is and are in questions with anybody somebody everybody anyone :( please help me :D