Could you check if I say something wrong? audio file which is related to telephon

[Maggie]

Hi everyone,

Recenlty, I got Torsten's mail. Torsten has mentioned about a audio file which is related to telephone expression. I think maybe I can try to pratice the audio file myself and ask others to check it out for me. At the beginning, I recorded it to a video file and uploaded it on Youtube. Here is the link,
. Hopefully, you can check it for me and tell me what I can do it better. Here I should thankTorsten for sending a great mail to me definitely. Thanks in advance.

Maggie :o
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