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#2 (permalink) Wed Aug 13, 2008 12:26 pm Present simple: do I watch this movie? |
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Hi Shafqat,
Thanks a lot for posting your questions. You are doing an excellent job and I'd like to make some suggestions:
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| do I watch this movie? |
Although this question is grammatically correct, it doesn't sound very natural. Here are my suggestions: Are you watching this movie?/Are you going to watch this movie?/How often do you watch this movie?
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| Does she know the current situation of market? |
Very good!
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| Do they visit the potential market? |
Do they often travel to find new markets?
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| Does he come to office in time? |
Does he usually get to the office on time?
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| Do we know how to handle the customer? |
Do we know how to handle this/that customer?
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| Do they close the sales on daily basis? |
Do they close a sale every day?
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| Does he go to office? |
How does he get to the office?
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| Do they go in the market for getting the sales? |
What exactly do you mean by "market"?
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| Does she work with them? |
Very good!
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| Does he go to other region? |
Does he also go to other regions?
Let me know what you think. Regards, Torsten _________________ Test Of English for International Communication TOEIC Preparation & TOEIC Vocabulary |
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#3 (permalink) Wed Aug 13, 2008 12:58 pm Present simple: do I watch this movie? |
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Thanks you very much I am thinking you are sitting with me and checking my exercise. your quick checking is really appreciated.
Now i wanted to know do you think i will be able to improve the writing skills.
Regards shafqat |
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Shafqat I'm here quite often ;-)
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#4 (permalink) Wed Aug 13, 2008 13:05 pm Present simple: do I watch this movie? |
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Hi Shafqat,
You have already improved your writing skills so keep it up! Please note the difference between "thank you very much" and "many thanks". Also, please remember to capitalize the personal pronoun I.
Regards, Torsten _________________ Test Of English for International Communication TOEIC Preparation & TOEIC Vocabulary |
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Torsten Learning Coach

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#5 (permalink) Wed Aug 13, 2008 13:17 pm Present simple: do I watch this movie? |
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Dear sir Do you think "many thanks" is better OR thank you very much especiallly in writing business or official language .
regards shafqat |
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Shafqat I'm here quite often ;-)
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