Passage: In any state, non-profit organizations cannot exist in the absence...

[Klpno]

Hello everyone

I'd like to ask if the following passage is written correctly:

In any state, non-profit organizations cannot exist in the absence of the following conditions:

1. Absence of serious obstacles from the state authorities for activities of non-profit organizations.
2. Presence of legal possibilities for financing non-profit organizations' activities.

[/guest/]

Make it more succint and eliminate unnecessary qualifications.

"Non-profit organizations cannot exist with:

1.Government obstacles.
2.Poor legal conditions for funding."

[Klpno]

Thank you very much, /quest/.

[Taeglich]

[Klpno]

Thank you very much, Taeglich.