TOEFL essay: It has been announced that a new restaurant may be built...

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It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan?Why?Use specific reasons and details to support your answers.

I live in a new community,there is no big restaurant,if a restaurant built in my neighborhood,it would be welcomed by most of the residents here.With the new restaurant our life will become more convenient,more happy and the local economy would also can benefited from the restaurant.

A new restaurant in my community will bring us more convenience,since people's lifestyle is faster than ever before and people's demanding on service is much higher.A good quality restaurant provides more choices on food,and service there is high standard.We can order Mexico food,French food and Chinese food in a big restaurant,if we are tired after work,it just takes us about 10 minutes to go out for dinner,so we can save a lot of energy on preparing dinner.A good restaurant can give the residents more leisure time and convenience.

Furthermore,a good restaurant is the source of happiness.Since there are not other public places for people gather around,a new restaurant provide us a nice environment to hang out with friends and families.Sitting in the elaborate decorated dinning hall with ou r friends,occasionally we sip a cup of coffee or nice tea,talk to each other,and in the mean time,the waitress serving us with delicious meal,all of these make the conversation more comfortable and happier.

Building a new restaurant can bring benefit to the local economy because the tax the company paid and jobs they provide.The new restaurant can solve unemployment problems in our community with recruitment from the construction workers to attendants,more people would find a job because of the new restaurant.In addition,the new restaurant will pay tax to the local government and public facilities would be improved by the increased income.A new restaurant can bring prosperity to our community.

Although,the new restaurant would attract more consumers to our community which could lead to some traffic problems sometimes,compare with the benefits the restaurant bring us,the advantages are outweigh the disadvantages.
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