TOEFL® essay samples: Why is science necessary in university?

[Sri]

Topic is Why is science necessary in university?
Awareness about science improves our knowledge.Now days, in every university
science is included because it improves our knowledge and also used in many scientific procedures.Thus it helps man kind ,and improves our economy.Technology has
improved alot .In many countries like India, most of the students prefer science as
their basic subject because, they can achieve good position in society.
Many scientist are working hard to improve the life expectancy of human beings
which is possible with knowledge about science.
Science has created many miracles to human beings by introducing
new drugs to Tuberculosis,and Cancer.
Science students has got better future with good income,and high position in society
thus, it improves economy.
In United states ,health care is in great demand ,thus introduction of science in university may help many students to become doctors,nurses,and
physical therapist and can help many patients.
Thus, introduction of science in universities may help man-kind and improve our economy.

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