TOEFL essay: If you could make one important change in a school that you attended

[Vinhnguyen04x]

141. If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

In my university, we have to learn so many unnecessary subjects. Therefore, that takes many school times. Therefore, if I could make one important change I would cross out these unnecessary subjects to concentration on main subjects and practice in the lab or on the field. It will improve our technique skill after we graduate.

Crossing out some unnecessary subjects not only save the time but also save money. These subjects take a large time in a semester, usually that take 1/3 of a semester time. It will affect to our school time and these subjects often difficult to study because they are not in speciality so almost students’ mentality don’t like to study. But in my university these subjects are mandatory subjects so whether you want or not you must completed these parts. It also will take our money to buy materials for subjects

To concentration our time on the main subjects and specialties. Everyone want to get a good job and high salary when they graduated, so when they were on the school they tried to learned and practiced a lot to improved their skill. We want to deeply study on our subjects so nobody want to spend their time on unnecessary subjects

We want to spend more our time on practicing in the lab and in the field so the time is very importance for us. Specially my university is agriculture and forestry, therefore, it claim many time for practice than theory study.

Now in my country there are many universities hava applied old regulations, among of them is to make students learn some old and unneeded subjects is one of issues, we must have some innovation in the education of education systems. Therefore, cut off and concentration on the speciality is the best way for students

[Fireonrocks]

Given an oppourtunity to change a thing in my school I would like to change the attitude of the school management towards sports. Our school was one of the best instituitions for studies but it is high time teachers get aware that extra-curricular activities including sports are equally important for the development of the child.

One of the reasons i would make to support this is sports is the best possible way of getting a child stress free. After all of the days work at school and tuitions children need some kind of a recreation . This would definitely increase their concenteration and energy levels .

Another examples is sports encourages team work. Many kinds of sports involving working together as a group this not only teaches them how to interact with different members of the team but also brings out leadership qualities in some children .Futhermore these qualities would help them after school when they get their jobs .

Finally,sports improves physical strength in a growing child . Games can be physically very demanding this improves childrens muscle power and immunity towards infections . Physical hardwork means more hunger n more intake of food this makes body stronger.

In my conclusion,all work and no play would make jack a lazy chap this fits right in here and explains why i would change my schools policy towards sports.