TOEFL® essay examples: Why do people attend school?

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I am a student of Camden County College now. I want to have a good life in the future, so I must attend school. People attend school because of many reasons. The first, we can get knowledge or degree from school (or college), we also feel more confident to talk to other person. The second, we can have a good job from the degree that we earned. The other, we will have a better life with this degree. Attending school is a good way to have better life.

People go to school to get an education which is the most important part of everyone's life. The education gives us knowledge that is happening around our life. It helps us know how to work and think correctly. We can get knowledge or further a degree about specific major from school. We can not earn a degree without attending school. The degree likes a certification of your ability about specific major that college trains us. Everyone can get knowledge or experience but they can not get a degree if they do not attend school. We will lose a lot of time to collect the knowledge and experience if we are out college, but we need a short time to complete the course to get those knowledge and experience. Other hand, the education is the shortest way to get knowledge and degree

The knowledge and degree, provided from school, help us to have chance to get a good job. A good job, better than three not so good jobs, gives us high salary and high benefit. And the important thing is we can enjoy this job. Because we just work creatively and efficiently as we like and want to enjoy it. We also have many opportunities to improve our career in the ladder of life-work

The benefits from attending school are very clear. The education makes our life become better and happier. It changes our life clearly. We will feel less stress from the pressure to earn money to improve the life. The stress in modern life always makes people feel less happy or uncomfortable. This is a cause of violence in family. And we have more time with family to share the housework or enjoy the life together. These matters are very important in the society today. We will have many opportunities to enjoy our life, such as house, car, luxuries or vacations.

Today everyone goes to school because of its benefits. In many countries, parents are required to allow their children attend school. Because basic knowledge is necessary to everyone. Further, everyone needs to attend school to get job. Everyone must be aware of importance of education. Attending school gives us a better job and a better life and this is a good way to get achievements in life-work