TOEFL essay: Describe the friend you admire

[Obaseki]

The name of the friend i admire is Latiha, one reason i admire him is because of his honesty.Whenever i am confuse, to know the true position of any issue i go to him.
Another, reason why i admire him is his sense of humor. I have never see any dull moment with him. however the situation may look like. He is always happy and optimistic about the situation.This is his slogger, whatever happen to a man is equal to a man, a man is equal to all his challenges in life.
Additionally Latiha, is a very caring friend.He can even forget about his own needs or problem and seek posible solution to your own problems.There was a day a had a very challenging moment in the school,i have paid for my school fees but i was to take a quiz that particular day. I had nothing on me to transport myself to the venue of the text. Latiha that have not paid his school fees,even eating anything for that day rally round to get me money.
In conclusion, because of all the qualities and many more to mention, i consider him as a friend i admire so much.

[Altaka]

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