TOEFL essay: I believe countries should be engaged with other countries

[Obaseki]

I believe countries should be engaged with other countries. This is true to me because there are many advantages to a country working with others. For example, new technology, trade, and information is shared.
Firstly, there are many new technologys in the world, that get more countries connected. The most important one is the oursourcing. Because of it people can get job in other countries.This is very good because it bring jobs to countries and help people.
Also, Trade is very useful to a country. Without trade, a country economic will be hurt. There are now many planes, shipes, and trains that sent goods around the world countries should use these in order to help there economy. With lots of trade, a country will be made more properous.
Lastly, there is more information now available in the world. Without working with other countries it might not be posible to use this.
In conclusion, I think it is obvious that countries should engage, not isolate for the reasons about,to ensure a global partnership.