#2 (permalink) Sun Oct 05, 2008 2:57 am can you help me by checking my grammar and mistake on this letter |
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Mr. Welly Eugene Delmas 75, Impasse Ambroise #14 Port-Au-Prince, Haiti Phone:
October 15, 2008
To: American Consulate General, Haiti
Tabarre 41 Route de Tabarre Port-au-Prince, Haiti
Sub: Issuance of visitor’s visa to Preach
Dear Consulate,
Greeting to you in the name of Almighty God, our Creator!
Every year our church celebrates Thanksgiving as one of the most important celebrations that magnify God’s blessings and opportunities for all in a week long revival in Brooklyn, NY from November 23 to November 30 2008. For this reason, the church of God (Holiness) committee in Brooklyn, NY has elected Mr. Welly Eugene to be our evangelist and the main speaker during this glorious manifestation revival week.
Therefore, it is with great humility we request from you a visitor visa for the Rev. Welly Eugene the week of November 23 to November 30 2008. If Mr. Eugene is allowed to come to the United States, it will be a blessing unto you, and it shall never be forgotten.
At the same time, we, the committee of Church of God (Holiness) will bear all responsibilities for Mr. Petit during his stay in United States.
Please feel free to contact us via Mr. Eugene's address above if you need more information concerning this matter.
Rev. Enock Lors, Rev. Jean-Pierre Lors Senior Pastor Associate Pastor
Yours Sincerely, Sincerely Yours Pick one or the other, but don't use both forms of this closing
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Hello Priscille,
Welcome to English-test.net. I've made some corrections in your letter above.
I hope there's still time for you to get a visa for Mr. Eugene. Often these things can take a long time to happen, and less than two months isn't much time for a visa application. Best of luck. _________________ Plan to be spontaneous tomorrow.
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