TOEFL® essay: Travelling to a different country can be both exciting...

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Topic: Travelling to a different country can be both exciting and frustrating at the same time. What are the most important pieces of advice that you would give visitors coming to your country? Give reasons and details to suppuort your response.

Although travelling to a different country is exciting, it is frustrating and difficult at the same time. Every country has a different culture, weather, language, money, etc. And visitors should know the differences.
I have some advice to the visitors that will come to my country, Turkey. First of all, in my country four seasons can be seen in every month. For instance, it can be rain in summer or it can be a shiny day in winter. The visitors comig to my country should take their raincoats, t-shirts and coats with them. There may be some cultural differences with my country. For example, man doesn’t kiss a man or a woman from lips while saluting. In some cultures, this may be a normal behaviour but in Turkey it is not normal. My other advice is about currency. Visitors should know that how much Turkish Liras their money makes. So, they can calculate the prices of goods easily. Let’s talk about language. In my country lots of people know how to speak English, German, Italian, etc. But some people know only Turkish. This means that a person who will visit my country should know some basic words and basic sentences of Turkish in the need of speaking with people that don’t know any foreign language.
As you see, visitors should take care about lots of details before travelling to my country. But I am sure that if they know these things, they will enjoy their time because there are lots of natural beauties and historical places in my country.

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