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#2 (permalink) Tue Oct 07, 2008 16:37 pm Expression "rise with the season" |
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Hi Gabriela,
Welcome to English-test.net.
If something rises with the season, it happens regularly at a particular time of the year.
In Mole's poem, without reading the whole poem, it's a bit difficult to say exactly what he's referring to, but based on what you cited, something is like a grief that occurs at a particular time of year (sparked by a memory, perhaps, or anniversary of an event?), which hibernates during most of the year, but is renewed/envoked afresh at a particular time each year.
Could you provide the entire poem, or at least the title? It's difficult to analyze and interpret just a few lines out of a poem. _________________ Plan to be spontaneous tomorrow.
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#3 (permalink) Tue Oct 07, 2008 16:50 pm Expression "rise with the season" |
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Hi Gabriela,
'Rises' in your quote suggests to me that the grief referred to, comes back to life - comes back to 'haunt', as it were, the poet
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#4 (permalink) Tue Oct 07, 2008 16:57 pm Expression "rise with the season" |
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| Alan wrote: |
Hi Gabriela,
'Rises' in your quote suggests to me that the grief referred to, comes back to life - comes back to 'haunt', as it were, the poet
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I know the feeling. You? :( |
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#5 (permalink) Tue Oct 07, 2008 18:54 pm Expression "rise with the season" |
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Many thanks to all of you! I think I've got it. However, Skrej, here's the poem, it's called "Wings". I can see you're a cat, so please don't go thinking it's about fried chicken (joke, of course). Whether or not they are of angels Or just the makeshift would-be Of human flight from humdrum To grace, theirs is a sudden restlessness On buoyant shoulders, an uplift Aimed at joy and making it. So for every earthbound thought There's the counter-weight, A grief that covers its face in shame Then rises with the season As if from sleep, unfolding wings To journey through the brightness of the air. |
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#6 (permalink) Wed Oct 08, 2008 0:09 am Expression "rise with the season" |
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The grief that "rises" is the "counterweight" to the "earthbound thought"; analogous seemingly to the "uplift aimed at joy".
It covers its face in shame presumably because it is no longer behaving as grief should behave: instead, it rises "as if from sleep", and unfolds its wings (as from a chrysalis) towards "brightness".
"With the season", i.e. with the new "season": the change in personal weather, after the period of grief.
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#7 (permalink) Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:10 am Expression "rise with the season" |
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| Thank you, MrP! |
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