TOEFL® essay: Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start...

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Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

There are no dubts that the habits of a person depends on what he do. It Depends if he study or work or do something else. But most of people deciede to organize his days thinking before on its work. Someone prefer to wake up early in the morning and work during the day, other people like more to operate in the opposite way: work by the night and get up later in the mornig. I rather prefer the first of these two possibilities, why?

First af all I like to wake up early because I always want to do a lot of things. Every morning I've to arrange my home. Many shops are open just during the day so I have to take advantage of it. Also my work costricts me to operate only by the day. I'm a carpentier so I always need my sellers opened.
Furthermore I haven't got a car. The only way to move around the city and go to work is the public transports. I'm used to take the bus but they working untill a certain time. By the way, sometimes, I could carry at home by my friends.

In conclusion there were some occasions where I came at home later and I woke up later in the morning, but this is not a rule. I have got needs, I depends on my work so I have to organize my life in this way. For this reasons I prefer to get up early in the morning.

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